This picture was taken by my brother in law at my brother
Ignacio´s last night in Chile (on the left). The picture shows my brothers (Ignacio and Pablo) and me laughing and
having fun. That night, my brother organized a farewell party to celebrate his
last moments in Chile. I remember that there were not many people, but it was
the right people. The people at the party had a vegetarian barbecue; there was
a group singing and dancing; others were just talking. But there are also
things I definitely don't remember (hahaha). However, it has been one of the best parties I have ever been to.
I really like this picture because it is the
last photo with my two brothers. It also reflects very well our relationship
and how we had a good time. I miss my brother. And I miss the things we used to
do. I hope we can get together again soon.

Y'all look so happy! it's a great memory.
ReplyDeleteAll elements well covered.
There are some collocation issues such as in the "farewell to" bit, also in "However, I think that was one of the best parties I have ever experienced."
On the whole, grammar range and cohesion and coherence are aspects improving.
7 pts.